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When I try to forget you, you’re always on my mind
Have you ever tried to get you off you’re mind?
Your love has taken me to places I’ve never been

Did you know you’re a hard act to follow?
Our love has made it past many obstacles

I no longer wonder where I’d be without knowing you

Little one, enough said
Our song says it all
Very few things surpass your feelings for me
Every little thing reminds me of you

You know when you dream and it seems so real?
“Our love was comfortable and so broken in”
U Known how to change to better yourself, even though I nudge you along.
©2003-2009 ~fallenchi
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Written while at work. It's for a special boy of mine, and he knows who he is. If you notice down the left side, each sentence starts with a capital letter that if read downward spells out the poems title.

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You may know this, but if others don't, this sort of poem is called an acrostic.


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"It's like the first time you tasted celery, you are speechless, even humiliated."

-Aki Riihilahti
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hey little one
love the poem and you know i love anything you do and cant wait to see what else you write and draw and well love


Talon
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i LOVE the last three lines, especially 'our love was comfortable and so broken in.'

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I see you, little caribou...

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